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Friday, June 19, 2020

First person on the moon




Hi Bloggers today Im  going to show you the first person on the moon. I think think i did really well do you? have you ever been to space before?



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  1. AnonymousJune 19, 2020 at 2:22 PM

    Hi Emily, I really like how you have set out your findings of the first person on the moon. I have seen so many stuff on the news about the moon during lock-down and I find it really interesting to watch. Yes I think that you did really well. Next time you could maybe double check your work before you post it because you have a few errors in there, but other than that your post is incredible.

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