Friday, June 26, 2020
Dad wavers space station
Hi bloggers today im going to tell you my dad wavers space station made up story I put a lot of efert into this hop you enjoy this story have you ever sean a Alien before?
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Hello Emilly. I am Hosanna from Waikowhai Priamary School. I really liked the ending of your story. Maybe next time you could write a bit more, and edit your work. It reminded me of the time I wrote a narrative. Anyway thankyou for sharing your learning with me. If you want to check my blog out here it is https://wpshosannab.blogspot.com/ blog you later.
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