Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 21, 2020
why we should wear any cloths we want to school
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Great job emily you have defintly perswaded me:)
ReplyDeleteBut who would wash all these clothes? You have made a pretty good point though, well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Emily
ReplyDeleteThese are good points that you make. I would love to see you expand on these ideas and write some more. You could add pictures to each slide too!
Ms Catton
Hi Emily! It's Greer, You have written this really well and definitely persuaded me. I really hope that the teachers will see this and consider letting us have no uniform!! š
ReplyDeleteHi Emily,
ReplyDeleteI agree with you we should wear whatever clothes we want to school!!!
We could lose someone because we are all in the same clothes.
Emerson