Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
Sneaky Snakes
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What an amazing job you have done Emily. I know that you worked so hard on this and that hard work has paid off! Your voice is really clear and easy to listen to, well done. Your challenge for your next video is to add in shorter videos so that their is more variety.
ReplyDeleteOk thanks it was a little tricky
DeleteWow, Emily you have done so well on this documentary! I don't like snakes at all! When I lived in Australia, some used to live in the rock wall in our back garden! I really like how you have shown your sources.
ReplyDeleteThat mast have been scary for you
ReplyDeleteHi Emily
ReplyDeleteWow this is an awesome documentary on snakes. I'm impressed with your clear voice. I'm scared of snakes so I'd never be able to hold one! Do you have a favourite type of snake? Great job.