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Wednesday, April 8, 2020

Back-Flipping Giraffes

This is what I wrote for one of our writing tasks about the Diving Giraffes.
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5 comments:

  1. LivApril 8, 2020 at 9:50 PM

    It was really cool to see you write this and how you watched the video, and picked up all the details that I missed! Well done, I love the design aswell as the content.

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  2. Ms CattonApril 12, 2020 at 11:50 AM

    Wow Emily, I am so impressed with the effort you have put in with this piece of writing. You used similes and exciting adjectives making this so much fun to read! I loved the background too. Giraffes are such cool creatures. What do you like most about giraffes?

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    1. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 8:29 AM

      Thanks Ms Catton My favorit part of it is when they flip of and into the pool.

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  3. MrsKerinApril 15, 2020 at 2:09 PM

    Wow!'Glass cups bashing together' is a great simile to use- I can actually imagine the sound! Next time remember to 'Think 6' and add a question for reader. Well done!

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  4. AnonymousApril 16, 2020 at 9:01 AM

    Thank you Mrs Kerin

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