Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, March 5, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Well done on your first post Ems! As soon as I read this I thought you might have been writing about when Hannah drew all over her wardrobe doors, hehe.
ReplyDeleteYour spelling is 'spot-on', great job.
Next time you could check if you need to use capital letters at the beginning of some of the words xxx
thank you I`ll do it next time
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